Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-24652012-20160501002843/@comment-17481441-20160508195703

Nikoli the rebel wrote: (I have just read this entire rp and I have a few thoughts.

1. Swims like shark is a total self centred jerk. He is wildly racist and he berates almost everybody he meets. He is impossible to get along with. That said, he is a very interesting character and I can't wait to see more of him.

2. You need to remind the reader of where you are. I have read hundreds of posts and I still don't know what planet you are on. You need to take a few seconds to describe each scene before jumping in. If you could tell me what planet you are on and the characteristics of that planet then I would be grateful.

3. Who are these aliens that are invading? I wasn't there during Xauri so I didn't get that reference. Who is the main antagonist?) (The alien invaders are the Greys. Oh, and by the way, I'm just as confused as you are. I don't know where to continue off. First we were in space, next we went into the atmosphere, then the cruiser is apparently grounded, and now we are in a civilian city that was supposably in ruins but now is frollicking with life. I don't know what to name this planet, but it is an established colonial world.)