Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-4794494-20141014230422/@comment-25357035-20141112043318

Nikoli the rebel wrote:

Nikoli the rebel wrote: (Review for anyone who needs it.)

(Yozoz's edit: There were a couple mistakes, so I just corrected them.)

Premise

We are on vacation on this asteriod called New Eden and it turns out that Black Fang has infiltrated the asteriod. So far they have set up shop underneath the eastern city and have spread their spy ring outward to at least 2 other cities (Mountain and the one that STARS is in). There is 7 cities in total.

Bombing of Eastern City

They have planted bombs on many buildings so the mountian city where Aylin Bray (Unnamed Field Marshal), Tacit Ronin (Spec Ops Unit) (Unnamed Field Marshall ), Yabab and Glofnog (Yozoz), Andare(Commander Heathcliff), Megan (Commander Heathcliff), and are in is up in flames. Dozens of clouds of smoke are rising.

Drive for the Communications outpost

Tactic Ronin, Yabab, and Glofnog (Only surviving members of Yozoz's lance) have narrowly escaped bombs and are trying to rally the troops by making it to a communications center.

UNKOWN OBJECTIVES: UFM or CH please clarify

Andare and Megan have just rescued Aylin Bray and are entering the firefight in one of the cities.

Poisoning attempt of the Royalty

Lord of the STARS and Madam Celestial Saber have just narrowly avoided a poison attmept and are going to sleep.

Failed Missile Prototype

Lord or the STARS has just interrogated a Black Fang member into telling him where Black Fang is headquartered. STARS then launched a prototype missile but it malfuctioned and was pulled by the sun's gravity towards the sun. Nothing can be salvaged.

Ship Carrying Civilians from a bombed area

Charmer (STARS' Character), Flower (Charmer's pregnate mate), and Yozoz, were at Charmer's house, but a bomb was slipped in by Black Fang mercenaries, so Charmer and Yozoz evacuated all of the civilians in the bomb's explosive vecinity, and escape into orbit.

Battle of the Black Fang's underground Lair/  Search for SARIN gas

Savior Team is spread out underneath the asteriod. They are trying to stop Black Fang's weapon of last resort. SARIN gas. A real life weapon of mass destruction that black fang plans on using if they fail, which they are now since STARS sent some reinforcments. The reinforcments pushed Black Fang away from the power core. (Progress 4 missiles down, 3 to go)

Drullkus's (Protagonist) entry

An unkown ship has just appeared with unkown intentions.

Premise for different Roleplay

Information has just arisen of a fragment of a carrier has crashed just out of New Galatic Republic territory. This will be a different rp though. Fox wouldn't like if we split up any more than we already are.

Attack on Augury of Juctice

The Augury of Justice has just taken a computer virus and is going to be boarded soon by mercenaries.

ANTAGONISTS/ ASSASSINS

Captain Holstein: Mercenary Captain

Hooded Figure: guy in charge of the operation

Minnae: A Naga assassin

Blake: Member of Savior Team (good guys) who has secretly turned to the dark side

Lord Edalius