User blog comment:1hs444/Origins/@comment-25316824-20141208005637

Good story. I read all of it. I think that you balanced the characterization of your foxes but didn't drown us in it. Well balanced. Although it came as a shock when I realized that James lost in the end. Now Fox is an orphan, how was he raised? This definately got me invested into Star Fox and I think I will investigate this alittle further.