Thread:Lord of the STARS/@comment-23782751-20140423013340/@comment-23782751-20140423021132

Well, as constructive criticism, the sentences trailed off into new topics.

(e.g.  I like unicorns but your gas tank needs refilled, also please dye your dogs hair purple)

My alternate sentence for the sentence above is: '' I moderately like unicorns. I forgot to mention this, but your gas tank needs to be refilled because I left your car's engine on all night. One last thing before you go, I suggest that you dye your dogs hair purple, as 'all the cool kids are doing it'.''